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A Never Ending Journey

A Never Ending Journey

Introduction
In the beautiful city of elagent & vivid Coast’s , Larger then life evenings, King Size enjoyment and a peaceful , Stress Relieving breeze @ the beaches with the golden sand is this place Goa India, Everyones holiday destination ……
The Place & its people are known for round the clock best hospitality , midst all this we have a beautiful girl named Eity who runs an Sea View restaurant , she is very positive about serving the tourists & dreams to have her own 7 Star Hotel Facing the beautiful Coast , On the other hand we have a travel guide named Remo  who dreams to own his own tours & travels . Now your immediate next guess would be both meet at such a romantic destination ! Why not fall in Love ? And then revolve round & round with ups and downs on a roller coaster ride of their relationship ! But seems monotonous or repetitive right ? No we are not going to experience that because this story is a thriller , Lets get to the edge of curiosity with breath taking suspense ! Get ready for the never ending journey of thrill.     

SCENE -1[In the Resturant ]
It’s a sunny noon when Remo walks in to Eity’s restaurant “Lets Fish” with a few tourists whom he is guiding on a tour in and around Goa, He orders for delicious sea food and a few starters to munch on until the main course arrives. Meanwhile even the tourists give their taste buds a royal treatment with the delicious and yummylicious prawns and lobsters. No sooner the main course arrives Remo loves the food and the same goes with the tourists.
After the delicious food Remo  goes for hand wash without realizing that hand bowl would be provided for wash , by the time he returns the customers pay their bill but then as Remo returns he is asked for the amount he quickly checks out his pocket to realize he has forgotten his wallet . He moves towards the counter and talks to the owner eity in a low tone .
Eity asks him for the amount and says “Listen Boss we do not accept credit I need immediate money , you should have checked for your wallet before entering in “
Remo says “Sorry beautiful lady but trust me I’m not among those fraudsters, I really didn’t carry my wallet “
Eity in a questioning tone “ How do you prove that??”
Remo says “Beautiful lady look into my eyes they never lie and if you can see youself in my eyes consider it to be crystal clear”
Eity I will have to call the cops and report this,kindly pay the amount and for Gods sake stop being flirty with me.
Remo anxiously “Madam please respect my way of approach, I aint being flirty It’s the way I talk and coming to your money (checking out his pockets takes out his smartphone) Take this madam until I return back the bill amount please keep my smart phone with you
Eity responds immediately this phone dosen’t start what’s the proof that it’s a working phone.
Remo says for now the phone is dead but if you have a charger you can check it right away and I insist you do not check my personal messages .
Eity gets convinced on this and asks Remo to come back and take his phone as soon as possible .
Remo leaves the restaurant with a promise that he will return back in the evening and pay back the amount.

In the Evening….
Remo enters Eity’s restaurant and finds it crowded he finds a place for himself meanwhile he waits for the waiter to place his order by the time Eity looks at him and points her finger at him by the time Remo responds, Eity’s brother Fabian enters the counter and questions her on the non-tallying amount as per bill,She explains him that its just a difference of 700rs and that a customer has left behind his phone as a gurantee. Fabian yells at her and demands her the phone which customer has left behind, she gives it to him and when Fabian checks the phone he gets to know that it’s a demo unit of a phone he yells at her in a loud tone and asks her to retire from her work if she has no care about the profit/loss , Meanwhile his loud tone attracts the attention of customers in the restaurant including Remo .
Fabian Questions Eity “Who is that customer??” do you have his contact details?? Where does he stay??
Eity(starring at Remo) responds in a low tone “I have no idea “
Fabian rages out and smashes the file over her table and says I own 70% of the share and I think you are planning for my downfall get lost if you have no idea on business.
[Tears roll out from her eyes she fells extremely offended]
Remo takes a look and immediately rushes at the counter pats on Fabian and questions him “Hello Gentlemen ! I appreciate your effort to keep the business going as perfect as 99.9999% “ [Looking towards the audience and says “ Bigg Bigg round of applause for this man who is a businessman but not a gentleman”]
Fabian pushes him down with force and says “How dare you? You enter my hotel you eat my food and you and you defame me ?
Remo aggressively “Your hotel my foot! First learn to respect a lady then come out in arrogance “ and more over its not your food “I Pay for it “ and moreover if you were that smart you could have got hold of the customer who fooled around with a demo phone as a guarantee[Looking towards Eity and smiling ]
Meanwhile Fabian calls the security and gets him out of the restaurant and before leaving Remo screams out loud to Fabian “Listen businessman I promise you will pay for humiliating and disrespecting a lady in front of so many people, I do not have regret for being thrown out from your restaurant I regret to have meet kind of person like you today” Shame on you
 He starts walking off meanwhile gets a glimpse of Eity looking at him aggressively.

SCENE –II [ Unexpected Meeting]

To get relief from the scorching heat and unsatisfying thirst Remo stops at a famous juice outlet named BLUETOOTH [may be named for the fact that it sells a famous drink which is blue in color and is called Bluetooth drink]
Remo orders for a Bluetooth drink, meanwhile there is a lady with her soft tone asking for Lemon Juice
Meanwhile Remo finishes his drink and drops the paper glass on the ground and starts walking .
No sooner he hears that same soft tone calling out “Excuse me gentlemen” ,this is not the way you degrade your own city . Have a basic courtesy to drop it in the garbage bin
Remo without even turning his face towards the lady responds “you sound so sweet but your words aren’t sweet, firstly its none of your business to point over me secondly there are people who take care of this I need not to worry”
The lady responds quickly “Are you nuts!! Its people like you who degrade the society and then say your country is not developing “
Remo rages out turns back and says Listen to me now (by the time he turns completely n says this he realizes that the girl is none other than eity,he stands still for a moment)
Eity says “You fraud “ you are here and what were you saying continue, let me listen to your dialogue
Remo says extremely sorry madam
Eity (surprised) Sorry for what? Sorry for that fraud or for today ?
Remo says listen madam listen I wanted to explain you that day but the mishap which happened that day changed the whole game , listen to me now that day I agree I gave you a demo unit of phone and fooled around and broke your trust but then I had no other way I didn’t have a penny in my pocket to convince you my intentions were just to escape for that moment and that’s the reason I returned back to restaurant in the evening but then I couldn’t tolerate some one humiliating you that way in front of the whole crowd and more over I was the reason for that mishap so I retaliated
Eity(smiling) Fine its okie but I liked your courage and the way you confidently took a stand for me,meanwhile can you tell me who keeps a demo phone with him ? (laughing) buhahaha I mean that’s so crazy
Remo (laughing) Actually I have been waiting to buy that phone but its way too costly I tried collecting money to purchase that but nothing worked in my favour finally all I could get was that demo unit which  always remains with me and inspires me to work hard and earn lots of money.
Eity says you are a kind of unique man seriously ! So it means you had not just given me a demo phone , you had given me your inspiration for so many days . So how were your days without inspiration ?
Remo (smiling) you have a great sense of humour beautiful lady you know my demo phone ie my inspiration was with you soo many days so I was forced to change my inspiration
Eity (interrupting) wait ! wait! dude You changed your inspiration lol , so whats there in your pocket now that inspires you .
Remo(excitedly) okie okie il tell you but before that I wanna know your name
Eithy (winkinf her eyes) Not soo easy boy , guess my name lets see
Remo(winking ) Okie lemme go by your personality you have hazel eyes so your name is probably HAZEL?
She responds  Nah no way  grrr …
Remo (thinks and stares at her) well you are so adorable and graceful your name should be gracy ?
She says shut up! thank God you didn’t say grocery ,by the way don’t guess so randomly , okie one last chance to guess
He says must be your name is Shimona , I don’t have  a reason for this but I just feel its an apt name for you ,Eity says no you are so very dumb dude one last hint for you ..My name starts with E and ends with Y and thats all about IT .He quickly responds this time I cant be wrong its eshly. She (in angry face) are such a dumbo I gave you my full name in the hint , I said my name starts with E and ends with Y and that’s all about IT so when you add IT in between E and Y its “EITY”
Remo (in a strange face expression) huh! What an hint by the way sweet name EITY suits your cute face with a cute smile, She says thank you boss now its time I guess your name
Remo(anxiously) Oh my God ! come on get going and follow my way guess my name as per my personality
Eity says okie done so let me start with the first thing that I observed about you , you sweat a lot like it rains a lot in Goa so I guess your name is Rainy something like “Rainy Dcosta” . He (in angry face) you iam going to kill you such an wild guess I cant let you guess long so its your last chance and I give you a hint “My name somewhere resembles the most romantic person ROMEO”, Eity immediately responds its Roadside Romeo is what I feel , Remo(in anger) Oh God save me you are such a freak playing with my name , forget it meanwhile coming to the point like your name is 4 letters my name is the same its “REMO”
Eity (Clapping) Woow romantic name I should say but I don’t know if it really suits you 
Remo says Don’t underestimate me Eity,anyways take this (puts hand in his pocket and takes out few bucks) your 700 bucks which were due on me . Et quickly gives it back to him and says there cannot be a price for respecting a lady and standing by her ,you are really a good human being so only thing i will expect from you is your friendship. Will you be my friend Remo?
Remo (Laughing out loud) buhaha lol you are asking me for friendship like you are asking me for marriage. Don’t be so formal et we are friends already, She says okie Remo now its time for me to leave lets meet some other day may be tomorrow you can come at my place i.e. My Restaurant, he says okie and they both leave to their respective destinations.



SCENE III [ REUNION PARTY]

 [After a few days of meet with et Remo visits her restaurant to meet her and he finds her with few of her friends giggling and laughing out loud over a discussion, he starts walking slowly and no sooner et notices him and calls his name loud remoooo come here as he walks in and comes she introduces him to all her friends]
Remo says Hey what’s up ladies?
All the friends out there respond we are rocking how about you roadside Romeo and he says et im going to kill you for sure , you told all of them about this . huh Et says chillofy Remo we all are friends now and all this is quite common, now listen we have been planning an outing together with all my college best buddies kind of small reunion , why don’t you guys join us it would be great fun together
Immediately Eity's friends say moreover Remo et will be very happy to see you and off Couse then follows our team who would love to see you.
 Eity says shut up guys ! we just good friends for which her friends reply when did we say you guys aren’t good friends ,see its you who is dreaming something big in your mind
Meanwhile Remo smiling responds i hardly know you guys wouldn’t it be a bit awkward moment ,Eity says oh common Remo don’t be so like a kid you will gel up well with us ,oh come on
Immediately eity's friends start screaming "Oh Come on Remo ...Oh Come on!" and finally remo aggress to join them for the outing which is to happen 2 days later .

Finally they plan a day long trip on their bikes to amboli Ghats which is around 110 kms from their place they discuss on the route to be followed and the stops and no of bikes needed for the trip , remo says he will get his bike and asks et to join him on his bike but eity says she wants to ride her own bike and enjoy the ride.
Everything is well panned and they finalize to ride 2 days from now.

After all the planning is done they set apart and count the days for their outing day
3 Days Later ...
Early in the morning at 5:30AM Remo sleeping at his room gets an ring on his phone ,he considers that as alarm and shuts it off without checking out the notification in 10 mins follows another ring like wise he mutes all the notification assuming it to be alarm and at around 630 he realizes that they were suppose to leave for the trip by 6 am .
 He immediately gets up , and gets fresh and calls et
Et says so horrible dude , i have been calling you past 30 mins and you have been
rejecting my calls horrible indeed
Remo says sorry eity i'am not a morning man i thought its alarm and switched it off,
extremely sorry eity il start from here right away il meet you near mandovi bridge within 15 mins
Et says you better be there in 15 mins exactly, your countdown begins
Remo says Boom il be there soon

Both leave for mandovi bridge and exactly within 15 mins Remo reaches mandovi bridge.

But eity doesn’t seem to have reached he calls her over and again for 45 minutes but she doesn’t seem to respond him, meanwhile he waits for her but then as she doesn’t turn up yet he tea stall to sip a cup of tea and as he is sipping in he gets an call from Eity
Eity says "Hello Sirji where are you? I have been waiting here since 40 Minutes ?? your 15 mins aren’t over yet? "
Remo anxiously "Et where are you right now" she says im here near mandovi bridge waiting for im from so long, he immediately rushes to the place from the tea stall and approaches eity Remo says "Madam Et before you utter a word lemme tell you Me and my scoter has been waiting for you past 55 Minutes and you come here now and v smartly say you came 45 minutes back "
Eiytywhatever doesn’t matter, come let’s leave our friends are waiting its already late
Remo says its late because of you and you are insisting me to hurry up so mean, she says oh hello! learn to be a gentlemen ladies have the right to be late it’s our birth right, Don’t mess with Eity , now come on let’s start our journey

They start their journey to Amboli Ghat on their respective scooters on the way they meet Eity’s friends and then they get on a high pace in order to reach amboli ghat as soon as possible and enjoy to the fullest

In 1 and half hour they reach amobli Ghats and there it is "The dark clouds, the wet ground and greenery all around surrounded by mountains and covered with fog getting a spectacular feel"



The selfie craze kicks off with the group starts taking selfies and pics to create
memories, after a while of clicking pics in and around amboli they set apart towards amboli water falls to enjoy out there

They reach the place and it looks something like this


Eity and her friends along with Remo enjoy splashing water over each other and for a while they enjoy in the water, after sometime they come back and gather at a place which is surrounded by greenery all around they take a place below a tree where they sit and start chit chatting with each other
Meanwhile Eity says "Guys we have a plan for you all we are 4 girls and you are 3 boys here we go with a plan"
Boys Anxiously "What is that Eity?"
Eity's friend Aisha says we have got few raw veggies and some masala sachets all you guys need to do is cook that’s all, no big rocket science, Okie right ?
Remo's friend jerry immediately responds "Oh My God" for boys it’s no less than rocket science anyways we have a good cook in our gang Mr. Remo who can cook mouthwatering dishes

Eity says Oh lemme see what he turns these veggies to, as far as I know Remo he knows to cook only non veg, so after cooking we will first experiment the dish with you guys and depending on the reactions we will eat those later
Remo says Madam let’s see we boys are no less than you girls, by the way what have you girls planned then
Eity says we have planned to cook chicken roast, we have got raw meat and few species we will cook up some amazing stuff, let us see who gets the best out for food today
Remo responds "challenge accepted Eity" , Come on lights camera cook, let’s get to work boys come on
Eity and her friends say east or west girls are the best, come on girls lets rock onn.
[Remo and his friends and Eity and her friends start seriously working on cooking the best meanwhile boys struggle in cutting veggies girls remain hesitant to wash the chicken pieces as no one is ready to even hold a single piece of chicken, After a while   After a while the boys start screaming and arriving towards the place where girls are
sitting and Remo screams out "Hip Hip Hurray...Hip Hip Hurray!" We are done .. we are done along with the veggie preparations we have also prepared something special.
Eity says "Remo and team lets assemble at the common sitting area which is beside the tree where we were sitting in the morning fine " we are also arriving there in few minutes with yummylicious and mouthwatering kebabs and roast chicken.
After 15 Minutes .. all arrive at the common sitting area
Remo says, come on ladies introduce your dishes right now! Because as you already know "Ladies First"
Eity and her friends hold the dish with kebabs and say "Ladies and gentlemen presenting to you our delicious presentation the yummy ...the tasty... the kebabs... the Eity way and moving towards Remo she asks him to open his mouth and feeds him with a piece of kebab .
Remo with a bitter expression on his face says "What on earth is this Eity?" Is it a
piece of charcoal or kebab[All girls start giggling] and Eity says we had a few peices of kebabs which were burnt during cooking so we had planned to target you with that piece now open your mouth again will feed you with yummylicious kebabs.[And she feeds him a tasty piece of kebab]
Remo stands up and says "Fasten your seat belts ladies as we present to you the fiery spicy Chilli Gobi 65 " Remo slowly walks towards Eity and feeds her a piece of it.
[Eity with tears in her eyes]
Seeing the tears in her eyes Eity's friends say "Aww so sentimental you have become Eity tasting Gobi prepared by Remo"
Eity says Shut Up! Idiots it’s not sentimental tears it’s the Gobi that is damn spicy man, irresistible seriously.
Remo's friends say "its okie Eity now i think we have balanced the challenge, lets feast as rats are growling in our stomach”
[They sit together and munch on the snacks and chit chat for some time, after a while when everyone is done with their lunch boys plan for a game and that is truth and dare everyone is assembled at a place and they arrange for a bottle to spin round ]
Remo with all excitement Guys lets circle round so that when the bottle spins there is ease in finding out at which person it has stopped and please no cheating abide by your words to take up truth or challenge no escapism [Remo spins the bottle ]
The bottle stops @ Jerry and Remo asks him TRUTH/DARE
Jerry chooses truth, Now Eity asks "Dude I know who your girlfriend is but all the friends out here are unaware of the truth can you open up on this?"

Jerry Says Oops I think I made a big mistake for which my girlfriend may kill me now , so I have to go by truth i should say my girlfriend is Nikki and as soon as he says this
Remo’s other friend Rohan pushes him and slaps him hard and says how dare you call her your girlfriend, me and nikki are in relationship past 3 years and you being my friend say this in front of me
Jerry says "brother I swear I’m in relationship with her and it’s not just one sided relationship we are committed past 6 months ask her?
Rohan questions Nikki in a loud tone " Whatever this guy is saying is it true?" but she keeps quiet and doesn’t answer later Jerry says Now i understand why Nikki would always stop me from revealing that we both are committed , Even Rohan says Sorry bro Jerry even i understand now why she used to even stop me from revealing .
In anger Rohan walks towards Nikki and tries to slap her but at the exact moment Remo steps in and stops him but Rohan tries to be defensive and pushes Remo and asks him to stay away as its none of his business in no time Remo gets up and stops Rohan again but he punches him hard and abuses him and then Remo loses his cool and attacks back and they start fighting.
Eity interrupts in between and slaps Rohan and says just learn to be cool and handle things dude don’t blindly get so rash have some sense don’t man handle and slaps him once again and says this one was for abusing in a such an obscene manner, I feel ashamed to have been calling you my friend, just get lost man
Rohan says "OH hello madam just because you are my friend you don’t owe to say every trash about me or slap me like this and insult me , you will pay for this EIty you will pay a very high cost for this insult mind my words ,for a guy who has become your friend just a few days back you are insulting me ? How dare you Eity?
Eity in a harsh tone Listen being a friend for long doesn’t matter dude ! You can loose your self respect for just a freaking 1 second but to earn it you take years think about it .
Rohan responds shame on you Eity for your selfish needs you are being supportive towards that guy , everyone out here knows you have a dream of opening a 5 star hotel and off course you need contacts and this guy can help you with that as he is a travel guide , such a selfish motive.
Remo immediately screams out shut up! Jerk else il trash you from tip to your toe learn to be polite, Meanwhile he is being interrupted by Eity who says Hello now listen to the truth i don’t owe to explain your version of thinking but just to make you realize lemme tell you I’m not selfish I’m standing by Remo because i LOVE HIM a lot.
Rohan laughing out loud hohoho you love this guy , do you even know if he loves you?
Remo quickly interrupts listen Rohan too much is too bad so shut up and get away , she answers to Rohan saying "dude i love him with all my heart so even if he rejects i still respect him as a person and for the kind of a respectful person he is. Now we don’t wanna waste time on you so i quickly sign off , chalo Remo lets leave and you guys come on lets leave for the day .
Remo and Eity call Nikki and Jerry and console them and ask them to move on with their lives as holding grudge or enemity wont fetch anything and from there they leave for the day on their respective bikes
Meanwhile both start their scooter and bike Eity starts honking and Remo turns back and walks towards Eity's scooter and asks her "What’s up beautiful lady"
Eity holds his hand takes off his sunglasses and stares into his eyes and asks him "hey handsome you didnt answer to my proposal"
Remo says " Darling I Love You was never a question" but lemee tell you what i feel for now Eity i do not want to make you stay in a fairy world with dreams about me , i have always seen you as my friend i dont deny to be not loving you either , but i'm just not sure or its just that i still do not have that feeling for you . Lets be amazing friends Eity .
Eity in a sad face expression "Its okie Remo and as you said I LOVE YOU was never a question its always a way of expressing love " Lets move on now
They both start their scooters and head towards their friends who are waiting at the road side and they start their journey back to Goa from Amboli all together. And before they start off they decide to stop at a motel named The Cape Town Motel for tea and snacks

SCENE IV [
After travelling half the journey back everyone stop at a The cape town Motel for sipping a cup of tea or coffee with some snacks to munch on, everyone reach the motel and wait for Eity and Remo even after waiting for around 1 hour they do not turn up at the motel, their friends assume them to have forgotten, they try reaching them on their phone but no luck
In 2 hours they leave from the motel assuming Eity and Remo might have left straight to Goa by 8:30Pm every one reach their respective homes
Each one of them try texting and calling Eity and Remo but their phone seem to be not reachable, time passes and its next morning still no sign of Eity and Remo ,
Next day Eitys friends and Remo’s friends visit their room but find their rooms locked they decide to approach the police and lodge a complaint
Inspector Brad questions Jerry “So where had you guys been and which route did you commute from?”
Jerry says we had planned a reunion yesterday and as per the plan we left for Amboli ghat’s on your respective scooter’s and after a whole day out we left for Goa at around 4Pm and we commuted from the usual route didn’t use any short cuts .

Inspector Brad enquires further “So Jerry or any one of you do think that Eity and Remo were committed something like if they have eloped together “
Nikki says No Inspector we don’t think they will run away with each other but yes Eity confessed to be in Love with Remo, but I don’t find any reason for taking such a step.
The cop again questions “So what was Remo’s reaction on her confession? Is he also in love with Eity ?”
Jerry says “No inspector and we don’t know what his answer was but yes we did see her talking to each other personally but not sure on what was their conversation all about”
Inspector Brad says okie we will investigate in the route between Castle rock to Amboli for any clues or hints , I will deploy few policemen on this mission in the leadership of Inspector Jimmy . [He takes out his phone and calls Inspector Jimmy and asks him to come to his cabin ]
Inspector Jimmy this is Jerry and his friends they are here with a complaint that their friends Eity and Remo have gone missing, I assign this case to you, Have a interrogation session with them and figure out the case I need Eity and Remo to be found as soon as possible .
Inspector Jimmy says “Yes Sir”
Inspector Jimmy asks everyone to follow him at his table and there he starts filing a missing case and takes inputs from them for the case , after the initial investigation he along with his assistant set part towards Amboli on their jeep to find if there is any clue that they get on the way
1 day later the super ident of police Brad calls up Inspector Jimmy to discuss about the case but Inspector jimmy is not reachable he waits till evening but he seems to be unreachable.
On the other end Eity and Remo’s friends are in a panic state as well as sad even they try calling Inspector Jimmy to ask on the status of the case, Jerry who is Remo’s best friend is in tension about Remo, he doesn’t inform his brother as well who stays at Mumbai because he hopes that Remo will be back soon.
After 2 days Eity’s brother Fabian is informed about his sister gone missing, he immediately walks in to the nearest police station to enquire about her.
Meanwhile Super ident of police brad gets a call from Maharashtra Police claiming to say that they have found dead body whose fingers are being cut and badly injured on face and his id card reads as Inspector Jimmy Calangute crime branch Goa.
Inspector Brad informs Fabian and Jerry that Inspector Jimmy is no more and was found mysteriously dead in the route near a place named Castle rock . Everyone is utterly shocked hearing this but Inspector brad bravely says we will find out the mystery behind this and I will deploy 2 of our best policemen for findig Eity & Remo.
Inspector Brad on fastrack basis assigns Inspector D’costa and Inspecor param to analze and investigate this case on priority basis , as its already been 2 days and there has been no news about Eity & Remo .
Inspector D’costa calls every friend of Eity and Remo and discusses with them , meanwhile Inspector param visits the IT department at the police station to track Eity and Remo’s mobile phones
Inspector D’costa questions friends “ Guys do you have even a percent doubt on anyone ? who can kidnap Eity and Remo for Revenge or so?”
Nikki says “No inspector I don’t think so because Eity was always sweet to everyone, though there were small arguments there is nothing very much suspicious to doubt on”
Jerry immediately says “Inspector I just remember one incident which happened that day , there was an argument between Eity, Remo and one of our friend Rohan, it went high when he man handled him , Eity slapped Rohan and later he had threatened Eity that she will pay for this”
Inspector says Okie so we need to get this guy for investigation immediately , where does he stay? Did you guys start calling him ?
Jerry says “Yes inspector we tried calling him but he didn’t respond to my messages or calls , I even sent him a whats app message that Eity and Remo are missing , But he didn’t reply even after reading the sms “
Inspector asks friends to leave as he needs time to reach out Rohan and interrogate with him as he is the prime suspect in this case now , Inspector D’costa along with his team reach out to Rohan’s house and find him there , they ask him to come to the police station along with them and cooperate in the case investigation .
Immediately they rush to the police station and take Rohan to the interrogation room
Inspector Dcosta starts off asking “So Rohan I got a news that you had threatened Eity that she will pay for her behavior “ Now that she is missing you stand out to be the prime suspect , so confess before we get you confess , tell me where is Eity and Remo ? What is that you have done with the?
Rohan[Scared and sweating] Sir I didn’t do anything, agree I had threatened her but that was when I was angry but I didn’t act as per my dialogue I cant even think of being so insensitive after all she is my childhood friend .
Inspector D’costa trashes him right and left with a cane and pressurizes him to confess the truth but all he says is he doesn’t know anything following the next day as well he is electrified with the electric shocks but still they don’t find anything worth from him and they plan to keep him in the jail for few more days until case is cleared .
Inspector Param arrives and discusses with Inspector D’costa regarding the case he says that after tracking Eity and Rohan’s mobile phone all that got was their phones got switched off near castle rock s, so he suspects that area to be the place where something might have happened , they both plan to visit the place and investigate in and around castle rock .
It’s the 4th day
They start their journey to Castle Rock to investigate in hours they reach the area but as they are not sure which could be the exact place where they can find an evidence they decide to investigate at 2 different places at a time , so inspector d’costa drops inspector param at a place and moves forward to a different place nearby .
They check for the bikes or any traces that could be helpful for the case but nothing is found meanwhile Inspector dcosta is returning back to the area where he dropped Inspector Param on the way he meets an old man at forest check post who asks for lift the cop helps him on the way to the place the cop questions the old man asking him whether he is a locale but the old man says he is not a local person in that area , the cop asks him if he had seen any strange incident nearby , the old man keeps quite , meanwhile he asks the cop to stop the jeep as his destination has arrived , he gets down and before leaving says Sir i find you to be obsessed with a case  though I couldn’t help you I think if we meet again soon or sooner I would be able to help you today I’m late .
Inspector D’costa start moving and thinks about the old man’s last statement that if we meet again he will be able to help him , in the verge of thinking he reaches the place where inspector Param was investigating but he searches for him but doesn’t find him , he walks few miles and finds a amputated hand lying on the ground, he walks further and finds few blood drops on the surface he follows further and there he finds a dead body with one hand amputated and a note written as “System Corrupted” and flips the body to the other side and finds it to be Inspector Param mysteriously murdered.
Inspector Dcosta is completely in shock about this second murder that has happened and seems completely clueless he calls the superident Inspector Brad and informs him about this incident which leaves him in utter panic state, this becomes a media issue and they highlight it says the cops are itself not safe how can general public stay free and cool .There is a lot of pressure on the police department regarding this case.
Inspector Brad insists the cop dcosta to take the help of local police and dig out the matter behind these mysterious murders meanwhile Inspector dcosta calls up an emergency meeting with the local police and divides them into team for night patrolling across the area, the start off patrolling the intial suspect areas in and around and find for any hidden area or camps near the jungle.

After few hours the walkie talkie speaking out Sir Sir we have found dead bodies of 2 of our inspectors both of their hands have been half amputated. No clues nearby.
Inspector D’costa immediately asks the complete patrolling team to reach the murder spot and search for clues meanwhile inspector dcosta moves towards the check post to find out if he can find any vehicles moving around with the murderer, meanwhile when he is at the check post a truck arrives he stops it and asks for the license but the truck driver says he has forgotten it , the cop scans the complete vehicle but doesn’t find anything , he prints a  official challan on his name  and says I let you go now but make sure you display your license within 10 days failing to do so would attract double the fine as per rules , if you display within 10 days then you are safe from penalty .
The truck driver leaves the spot saying thank you to the cop meanwhile a car arrives which has drunk bachelors riding it , they produce the documents and license but Inspector asks the local police to arrest them and keep them in lock up for a day as riding in this condition could lead to some ones death on road.
Meanwhile he continues the routine check all night but doesn’t find anything suspicious at all, meanwhile there is a lot of pressure from inspector brad as 2 more cops were found dead last night. Inspector dcosta asks for 2 days of time to clear the case and now as he thinks on how he can crack this case he remembers the old man’s dialogue “if we meet again soon or sooner I would be able to help”
He immediately goes back to the same check post where he meet the old man that day and to his surprise he finds the old man standing there
Inspector Dcosta asks:Don’t you want lift today gentleman?
The old man says Yes Sir with all pleasure he gets into his jeep m the cop asks him what is that he meant that day when he said if we meet again you would probably help me ?
The old man says Sir will you take me to the place I ask you to take me to , that’s where I will tell you a few facts
Inspector Dcosta feels this person is itself the serial killer and stops the vehicle takes his gun out and points at him and says Now you better tell me the truth ! out are the serial killer right? or I will shoot you right here
The old man out of fear says sir please don’t scare me I will tell you the complete truth but please come along with me to the place I ask you to , I know something about Eity and Remo
The cop is stunned and trusts the old man he drives through the way he asks him to ride thorough and they reach a place  facing the valley where there is a small hut


The old man asks him to park the jeep and start walking along , they walk for few minutes and reach the hut in the hut there is a young man sitting on a chair with aggressively grown beards and shabby clothes he comes to the cop
He says “so you are the cop who survived the truth after days of wait I found you today rest all of the cops I meet are system corrupted “
Inspector dcosta interrupts him and says “heloo put your hands up what did you just say ? “System corrupted” This was exactly the same quote written on Inspector Params shirt when he was found dead .
The shabby man says don’t analyze much over this super cop , short and sweet to be clear “I’m the one who has murdered all these cops so brutally”
Inspector D’costa takes out his gun meanwhile he is stopped by the shabby man who says Wait Mr.SuperCop if you want me to surrender I will do it right away but I need one of my work to be done if that’s not fulfilled I will kill myself so no use of your efforts right ? the choice is yours .
Inspector Dcosta curiously “What is your demand “
The shabby man asks the old man to leave and calls the cop near him and shows him a few Id cards and speaks to him for a while privately and explains him some things pointing out the road and the valley . In few minutes the cop returns to Goa to calangute police station, he calls Superident of police Brad and says he has found the murderer and has something to discuss , on the other hand he rings a call another person privately .

SCENE V [ The Final Judgement]
Inspector Brad who is the super ident of police at calangute arrives at the station he comes to his cabin he is accompanied by the commissioner of police and a few senior cops , inspector brad calls up the cop Dcosta to come in
Inspector dcosta arrives and starts explaining the no of murders which happened in and around castle rock and show the photo of that shabby man who was behind these murders and he says he will produce this guy only after a confession from someone really important
The commissioner of police asks who’s confession do you need?
 The cop says  our beloved Inspector Brad’s confession
Inspector brad says Shut up! Dcosta what the hell are you up for
Inspector dcosta takes out his gun and says today for all that I do I may get suspended but I will get justice to those numerous life we have lost because of your mistake and I would be proud about that . he futher ads to it and says no one is suppose to get up from their places as we are covering this meeting live on tv as you can see(pointing to the camera ) we have the hidden cam with 360 degree rotation which covers the whole meeting room , So Mr Brad please tell us what is that had happened that day when you were at castle rock 5 days back for routine check. How was your meet with the 2 young teens Eity & Remo? And what was the incident all about ,speak out in 2 minutes or I will shoot you(Pointing the gun right to his forehead.
Inspector brad keeps quite and says please stop being over smart ,meanwhile inspector dcosta shoots a bullet at the television inside his cabin and drops the water glass on floor and screams out loud , speak out or I will shoot you right now right here in front of the national television , immediately 2 guys enter in getting in Mr Brads Son at the gun point and threaten to kill him .
Inspector brad immediately stands up and says please leave my son , keep him away from all this please I will confess my mistake .

Listen I’m extremely shameful for have done this being at this level , 5 days back I happened to be at Castle rock area for routine check at that moment a young boy and girl came with their scooters I stopped them and asked for license the boy had his license but the girl didn’t have bike insurance papers as well as license , I asked her to pay me fine of 1,000 rs and I would let her go but she denied ,later on the guy along with her started arguing that we have 10 days to produce the documents you can let us go with a  challan generated again the vehicle number but I didn’t agree to him , I forced the girl to lend me money but she again denied that’s when my focus went on to the Gold chain and ring she was wearing I though they are kids and I can threaten them and take the gold chain and ring and earn money I asked her politely but she denied , I then moved my hands towards he neck and tried to snatch the gold chain and I tried to even forcefully take off the ring from her finger by the time I do that this guy who was with her pushed me down the floor and kicked me and they started their scooters and started racing faster I followed them with my jeep as I was extremely angry the guy pelted few stones on my jeep while I was riding my jeep and following them and this made me extreme angry and I took out my gun to shoot the guy but then this girl who was right beside my jeep saw me doing that she raged forward and as I was about to shoot she came right in front of my vehicle to miss guide my target towards the guy and by jeep hit this girl Eity and she was hit my my jeep and she along with her vehicle went down the deep valley .

(Inspector Brad crying out )continues and says I didn’t know what to do if I stop the guy would get to know my name so I escaped from that place .
The commissioner and other senior officials are left out in tears listening to this incident, the television has exposed this cop live on tv and there are already a lot of media channels and public protesting outside the poice station
Inspector Dcosta says this is the deep truth in our recent times , the public is more of fearful then happy to approach the cops , we have been lead by a man who himself is corrupt .
And now to reveal the name of the murderer he is none other than the guy himself i.e. Remo , he was the only prime eye witness behind all this but if he would approach the police his case would never have been solved so he just executed a simple game “whenever a police came for investigation he used to dress up in a completely different avatar and act like a truck driver or a cab driver having no license and then if the cop demands for money in illegal ways he would kill them , that’s how Inspector Param, Inspector Jimmy and a few other cops were killed .
Inspector jimmy’s fingers were cut because he was counting the money with those fingers and demanding more money
Inspector Param’s one hand was amputated as he was trashing people with his hands and threatening to give money
And rest of the 2 cops hands were cut half as both were sharing the corruption money with each other.
 And coming to me I was the only one who didn’t demand money illegally and this won his trust and he choose me to be the cop to get him justice .I would be getting him to goa soon and we will see what the court has to decide on this case as he is accused of 5 murders .
Now coming to Eity we didn’t recover her body yet all I can say is we might have lost her but we surely got justice to her.

In the evening Remo is arrested and got to the police station meanwhile he is being covered by media he chooses to speak and says
Eity was an extremely special person for me and I don’t feel regretful for having killed soo many corrupt cops to get justice for her, coming to personal front she had proposed me but I denied her proposal for the fact that I had planned a way special candle light dinner and had planned to propose her with those beautiful roses and an exotic cake. I don’t mean to be materialistic but my dream ever since I was in college was to propose my dream girl this way and make her feel special. But I’m unlucky that she passed away even before I express my love for her , Life has been a never ending journey for me from the day I lost Eity all I used to do is sit at that hut n look at the road and the valley to see if Eity comes back.
If my friends are listening to me live now my only wish would be please release all my funds from bank and build a small restaurant facing the beach specially for candle light dinner for those who wish to express their love can visit the place anytime .
Meanwhile slowly I will surely try and make Eitys dream of opening a 5 star hotel soon as I’m out from jail.
My only message to youngsters would be live life large, love with all your heart   and never delay in expressing your love for you never know what’s in store next.

Inspector D’costa gets promotion for his brave job and he is now the new Superident of Police at Calangute Goa,one more person who was missed is the background actor Phani who was the person behind the live coverage throughout the country . He becomes one of the sensational Journalists of the city.
Remo is under judicial custody and his case verdict would be out very soon .This gets us to the end of the story A Never Ending Journey.


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